tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3860972.post8714666478663125960..comments2023-10-28T21:04:41.299+08:00Comments on Inilah Fahmi: Saya Mahukan Komen Anda! :)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3860972.post-66629966627207209512008-06-11T20:07:00.000+08:002008-06-11T20:07:00.000+08:00salam to abddu :)first, thanks for listening to my...salam to abddu :)<BR/><BR/>first, thanks for listening to my song. <BR/><BR/>second, thanks for leaving that commment. it really inspired me to take it to the next level, i suppose :)<BR/><BR/>third, thanks for specifically comment on each of the things. I'm impressed with those comment, actually. It shows that you are a good listener, perhaps you are better than me :)<BR/><BR/>I will try to improve on the aspect you suggested. <BR/><BR/>On the composer-singer thing, I compose better than I sing. The voice was just to guide the actual singer sing, as what they should do :)<BR/><BR/>Thanks again. Look forward for my next collection ok? :)Fahmi Mahathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04704924149974112154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3860972.post-82252645762879792312008-06-11T16:53:00.000+08:002008-06-11T16:53:00.000+08:00peace ... salam ..well well ... someone who is int...peace ... salam ..<BR/><BR/>well well ... someone who is interested in digital music i find you, good .. coz mee too is ... <BR/><BR/><BR/>anyway, lets get into comments as u requested ... <BR/><BR/>i had some bad time downloading from rapidshare as sometimes it will tell my i cant download and have to wait ... but no problem .. i got hold of some of the tracks ... <BR/><BR/>after some a number of some listens ... specifically to your "Kisah dendam dan sesal" which so far i consider to be your "masterpiece", <BR/><BR/>i can only say that you should watch out for the quality, i mean the quality of sound, as i know you have used a normal microphone - but that can be refined by using different sound wares such as samplitude or audition ... with those u increase the volume and add more effect to the sound depending on environment .. such as reverb and chorus ... not too much but to a certain extent ... or do whatever else u see reasonable<BR/><BR/>then comes the quality of instruments or (synthesizers) used, there are many out there (even free ones) that can reproduce different sounds (good also)... but in ur collection u kept using some same instruments over and over ... for some songs u might have used a piano to give a more sad tone ... but i wont touch that part since its under "personal preference" ... <BR/><BR/>music quality: u have some nice and simple composition there .. i admire that u can make simple music and sing over it ... but again the question arises: do u really want to become a singer? or a composer? or both? ... coz each of them takes more time than the other .. so here i see that u lost focus ... and i dont think that as a student (if u are still) will have that much of time ... or u can focus on the piano, and i think u will succeed since u have knowledge of music and composition ... <BR/><BR/>then comes ur control of ur own voice ... this one needs practice, u have proven that ur voice is a singing voice in some parts .. but some parts will get bad results ... maybe more practice b4 recording or recording in multi sessions should help ... <BR/><BR/>u need a new set of instruments my friend ... find the orchestra pack ... or some jazz drum pack ... that suits the type of music ur trying to implement here ... <BR/><BR/>something which i really dont want to forget commenting on is the "mastering" ... leveling of volume and stuff like that .. u have a wide stereo range as well ... why not use it? u can put instruments and drums on a wider range or scope so that the appear natural ... not too electronic unless u intend electronica music such as trance ... <BR/><BR/>finally, why dont give instrumental music a try ... u might find that its more enjoyful than songs ... this is just a personal opinion since i think that human voice will only interfere with music and should be let alone ... give it a try!<BR/><BR/><BR/>i may come back with some in-details comments regarding each song .. so far iv listened more than half of that set u have .. <BR/><BR/><BR/>so good luck!<BR/><BR/>wlslmAbDdU!https://www.blogger.com/profile/12715562889807239265noreply@blogger.com